Roughs for a mailer

So I'm working on a mailer for promotional purposes and I have some roughs done. Lately I've been toying with the idea of using a some line work in my pieces and this is my first real delve into that. Two color comps:



So yeah. I mean, the drawing was just a quick self-portrait in graphite, for the final I think I may use ink. I'm also not entirely sold on the text placement either. The back is going to have a smaller black and white version of the same portrait but with a little something.... extra.







Evan